Bailey Holcomb

I hear the music, In the wind and rain. In the cars' beeping horns. I hear everything together, And I hear a rhythm. I raise my hands, Moving them in ...

I'm happy you wrote about music. I am a trumpet player, so I can definitely relate. I love the part leading up to the climax. Good job.

These questions aren't meant to be answered. This is just supposed to reflect how I feel. If anything's possible, why can't I regain my strength? If the sun's coming out ...

I liked it, Sarah. The thing that I didn't find was the rhythm. I might be wrong, but when I read it, I didn't find it. Who is she ? ...

My angel above my shoulder, My angel above my head. My angel by my window, My angel above my bed. My angel never leaves me, Guarding me as she clings. ...

Honestly, I liked it. I love repetition and imagery. In the first stanza, you made me feel like I was in the move Alice In Wonderland . I loved that. ...

Guys! This was just a JOKE! Not a Real Poem!

The sun is out; make it go away. The bunnies hop; make them stop. Oh, woe is me on the sunny day. The deer is running; make him trip. The ...

I love this. I love the repetition and internal rhyme.

In the meadow, The rain falls and never stops, Keeping the grass green and the sun down. The birds stay in their nests, The squirrels in their trees, Never leaving ...

When your life seems so great, And nothing can bring you down, Why does someone come and break your heart? When you're happy as can be, And you feel so ...

I liked this poem! Very well written I must say! To me, it seems a little mysterious. That is what I like in a poem. A dramatic, mysterious, cautious type ...

I love the repetition and the similes! VERY GOOD! I love the free verse and the "swamp mud" I think is what you said. I love it! I wish I ...

I personally really like this poem. It isn't what I often read and it shows a lot of feeling. It seems really dramatic, but in a very fascinating way. I ...

Hey! This is good. I like the free verse in it and I honestly wish I could write such details as these! I am trying new things because quatrains tend ...